The 2017 online writing exchange was fun for me. My mentor taught me a lot about about writing. He taught me to look for unneeded details, and to keep details that help the reader envision the story. He also taught me to go into detail for parts that people that haven’t heard the story before wouldn’t understand. I think my mentor best suited me because we have a lot in common and he related to a lot of things in my stories.
My mentor also made me feel more confident with my writing. He commented on parts telling me that he liked them or that I did a good job using words in sentences. He would never comment on random parts, only on parts he liked or that he thought needed a little changing. I like how my mentor does things, because how he’s giving me advice and helping me is easy for me to understand.